Me, posting about typos while having typos. 🥲

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Thank you so much for reading! Back I go to figuring out who my winner will be! Please do guess if you think one of these (or any post in any #10Queries is yours. It's so much fun for us :D #RevPit

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10/ ASc - Q: On the high end of adult word count; may be perceived as a lack of self-editing/cutting filter words. P: Beautiful use of senses. Disseminate info conveyed in early paragraphs more naturally rather than using interiority, so it doesn't feel like non-fiction. #RevPit #10Queries

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8/ AF - Q: Comps are more compelling when you tell us what aspects of them your novel shared. While you have that info lower down, consider moving to the top rather than having two data paragraphs. P: Amazing use of multiple senses to immerse the reader in these early pages. #RevPit #10Queries

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9/ AF - Q: A detail in the query body immediately conveys this isn't a Mary Sue. Love! P: The bad thing that happens to people MC cares about are only compelling if we first see MC interacting with them in a "normal day" kind of way. Show us an MC's everyday before you break it. #RevPit #10Queries

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