William T. Torgerson - Analysis Paralysis Dialysis
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Wandering semi-idiot with a love of words and a penchant for misspelling beaurocracy. I write weekly essays exploring the absurdity of life and the strange mechanics of being human at 30DegreeShift.com.
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William T. Torgerson - Analysis Paralysis Dialysis (@williamtorgerson.com) ist seit 20 Februar 2026 auf Bluesky. Das Konto hat 61 Follower, folgt 109 Konten und hat 478 Posts veröffentlicht.
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