bloodsbane.bsky.social
30+ | she/they/it | some form of small beast | freelance artist | hobbyist writer tags: #ocs, #fanart
👤 Joined on 17 October 2024
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It was me and her and her monkey stuffy and we had to hold on very tight so the three of us didn’t get separated and don’t be silly of course I didn’t almost cry playing Potty Poops because my daughter was clinging to me saying DON’T LET ME GO MOMMY WE NEED TO STAY TOGETHER
Show Postthe dialogue bits i thought were roughest were: the quippy robot assistant in the opening, the argument between the two leads about sparky, the ending where whatshername realizes gwen isn't like the other gwens. all could be served a lot better with less words & more room to breathe imo.
Show Postmaybe??? but i don't expect it to change tbh. i think the issue isn't just plot exposition, it's also always explaining how the characters feel and what they're thinking, rationally, instead of letting them just be mad at each other, maybe even somewhat illogically (because that's how anger works)
Show Posti think m/f romance can be very beautiful despite their differences.
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