"idk man, that movie was weird, they kept cutting to these beautiful panning shots of nature and letting us take in the sounds of the forest. I don't see how that furthers the plot."

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Sex scenes can have narrative value for character development, etc, but you can also include them if they don't. You can include them because it makes you happy. Like you would a beautifully composed shot of the landscape

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Ppl will be like "if the sex scene has no narrative value it shouldn't be included." Ok, jokes have no narrative value. Does costuming have narrative value? The set dressing? Maybe some parts of a story can just be there because they are ENJOYABLE. What a concept

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"He smelled the way the Taj Mahal looks by moonlight"

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"ZIRCON PLEASE DON'T TELL" guuuuess who forgot to post the final update yesterday. this guy. but that's the end of The Bathhouse! it'll be collected into a PDF, probably next month. thanks for following along!

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