duncanotoole.bsky.social
I am a guy from Denmark who is dumb enough to think he is great at writing Fantasy Novels in English. I am still waiting for someone to tell me otherwise.
👤 Joined on 05 November 2024
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@duncanotoole.bsky.social3 reasons readers stop reading your book after chapter one: Too much exposition too soon Readers want movement, not a lecture. Weak stakes Why should we care? Flat opening No tension = no curiosity. Your first chapter has one job: make readers NEED chapter two. #saintpen #betareaders #amediting
Show Post"I'm always interested in epic fantasy with big worldbuilding, high stakes, and characters to get invested in." Rose Ferrao #MSWL psliterary.com/submissions/
Show PostWow that‘s crazy detailed. All I got all the time was „no thank you byeeeee“.
Show PostGo for a beta reader first that would really help a lot.
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