So ready for gay Halloween to dominate my TL today 🎃

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Current solution is generic slugline eg, INT. HOTEL Not INT. HOTEL - LOBBY Then in the action lines, state where we are within the hotel: In the LOBBY [something happens] INSIDE THE ELEVATOR… a person waits for the door to close IN A GUEST ROOM… a character sleeps.

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In my own writing, been working hard to fix things cause readers to slow down or pause. One recurring issue is how to move the action around to different areas under a single slugline. Example: INT. HOTEL One scene can move from lobby to restaurant to elevator to a room. How to guide the reader??

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Fun setup! Trying to study these more closely… First slug includes STAIRWELL. A few lines down, he’s no longer in the stairwell. A mini-slug would fix that, or move “stairwell” from the slug to 1st action line, and add “In hallway” to later line Also: why is hoodie “sweat-soaked” on a snowy day?

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Goddamn, writers are the coolest people 😎

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